Progress report
Oct. 22nd, 2018 12:15 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
pettycoatThe fourth chapter of There the Rain Raised Mountains has just broken 25,000 words. It is now almost twice as long as every previous chapter combined. Have a preview before I dive head-first into revisions:
The Voice: WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS
Rider:
The Voice: I feel like I've failed as a father and can no longer ignore the avalanche of emotional instability currently brewing in my brain.
Rider:
Rider: *eyebrow*
Dramatic thunder! Convenient rainstorms! Hamfisted flower symbolism and paragraphs of navel gazing as Petty once again forgets we're in a sci-fi setting!
I am such a hack.
The Voice: WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS
Rider:
The Voice: I feel like I've failed as a father and can no longer ignore the avalanche of emotional instability currently brewing in my brain.
Rider:
Rider: *eyebrow*
Dramatic thunder! Convenient rainstorms! Hamfisted flower symbolism and paragraphs of navel gazing as Petty once again forgets we're in a sci-fi setting!
I am such a hack.
